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*Grumble grumble*
I lack the ability to come up with good titles. D:

Anyway~...
This is the result of me going through hundreds of comments, writing down all the critiques and advice you kind, lovely people have so generously given me, and trying to apply all that wonderful advice to a single piece. :D

I hope it works well.

Though, a few things bother me, and I'm not sure how to fix it and make it look better.

Number one, the sword bothers the hell outta me. First of all, that's not the design I had originally drawn, but my mother (yes, my mother) made me change it! xDDD
So, that's her design, not mine, well, not mine entirely, anyway...
Second, is the girl's far leg. I don't know what's wrong with it, I can't tell, I just know it bothers me. So, perhaps, you kind, lovely people could help me out? :please:
And the ground bothers me, too...but, not enough to make me want to go back and change it all... :/

Umm...yeah...this was just random...a snake/demon/girl/elf/thing...I really have no idea what she is, all I know is she was so much fun to design! xDDD

And I hope the bamboo in the background isn't too overpowering...I needed something in the background, but, I just didn't want it taking too much attention away from the main focus and--- OMG! Shut up, Tobit, before this becomes an essay! Dx

Comments and critiques please!
And enjoy!! :D
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Original-Blue's avatar
This looks really great! I think you think the right leg wonky because it's not braced against anything. But it's not wonky at all, just a weird perspective thing. Amazing job! :thumbsup:
-Blue